Lars:
A tale of a troubled marriage due to an affair, packed with imagery and dialogue. Well-written, made me want to keep reading.
fraze:
I think I voted for you in the last 2 weeks you participated (and they were good pieces) so I was expecting something more. This rhymes. But there's no story to grasp and it's more of an open mic flex if I'm being honest. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but when you're facing Lars you've got to bring an A game. This verse left me wanting more, is how I'll sum it up.
V Lars
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