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Originally Posted by ~RustyGunZ~
How many faggot accounts I gotta merk? Twitter fingers gonna bruise ya neck
I should be exiled to Parler with all the dead names of I've abused to death
like this concept but of/I've wording isn't helping you
Schein is guttah & when the squad roll his way metal gon fold this fake
This freaky friday.. We gonna see a redhead put dots all over an old bitch face
who's the redhead? concept is cool but didn't set this up well
Ya complex wordplays is trash, stop tryin to be Bayou to win & learn dude
This loser is Georgia, soon as he thinks about votes his whole state turns Blue
cool current events punch. wording is off to me but still like the concept
Cus u obsessed w/ impressing men, bring u to the rape sphere to meet ur fate
Bagga done told me, only time you drop bars is when u try to deadlift half ur weight
this is ok. kinda light
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Quotes: Parler, Georgia
Close: Freaky friday, deadlift
Nothing was a bad miss but not a fan of your wording in all places. Tried not to penalize you too much for that but it will affect the vote if the battle is close.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Doc Savage
I'm winnin this shit, who thought this fat fuck could compete!?
ALWAYS the loser. dude only reverse roles suckin his gut in @ the beach
cool opener. creative
Wife fat af too.. if she fell into seths arms it'd snap his shit
Way he stay attached to pulling jumbos his life's been a strongman event
i get it. ok punch
And she cheats fast, male bodies appear w/ their dicks
Box was made for more swords to be in at once than magicians tricks
ok. not the hardest but it hits
I'll leave the scene clean & real quiet when I shoot gunz
Silencers got the remedy, cuz a potatoes helping me to remove rust
i guess this is ok.
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Quotes: opener, strongman, magician ticks
Close: closer
Nice verse. Enjoyed the read.
Vote: Doc Savage I have Doc taking this on quotes.