Quote:
Originally Posted by Adverse
You got family? Pets? Say deuces. No truces when I empty shells
You pissed me off now I’m making EVERYTHING disappear like Zuch did with the NBL
haha. memories, right?
Trying to prove your ass belongs? I’d rather have this stupid bastard gone
Next time they ‘remove you from the ‘Cord’ hope it’s weeks after u kicked the stool u standin on
little wordy but still hits
This 4-5th gon’ flex, if I threaten it you’ll feel that chrome hit your chest
While Dave ain’t made a ‘scratch with them arms’ since the Tyrone Biggums sketch
concept is hot but the angle is weird to me. would have liked different setup
Dude’s getting sprayed fast, I’m ruthless and stay strapped
So next time ‘a UPN dude gets hit with a 40’ it won’t be from Blue on the Chase App
light to me
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Quotes: Zuch/NBL, removed from cord
Close: Tyrone Biggums
Solid verse. Creative references and you did a good job on the execution side also.
Quote:
Originally Posted by evaD
I’m a manager. You’re a janitor. Try and be real when you diss
The only time you tool up is when the school wants you to clean up some piss
nice personal
Depressed topical nerd unloading feelings into some new haikus
I’ll force this overgrown prick into a breakdown.. just call me blue bayou
don't get this ref, sorry
My headquarters where I bag up, any intruders get the shotty
Your headquarters will be bagged up after I’ve finished dissecting ur body
this is borderline to me. kinda of creative, kinda also a variation of the standard 'chop up your body' punchline
Your mother must’ve been reeeeal ugly.. messed up grill n a big snout
The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree and it wouldn’t look out of place in this pig’s mouth
concept is cool, but something is missing to me in the punch
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Quotes: opener
Close: headquarters, pig's mouth
Solid verse. Nothing was bad per se but there were a couple stylistic things that that didn't work as well for me and the missed reference hurts in a 4 bar contest.
Vote: Adverse I had Ad with a slight edge in a close battle. If Dave had switched out one of his bars for another quote that could have leaned the needle to his side. Good stuff on both sides.