Adverse:
Some good light jabs. Liked the closer most.
Dave:
I’m a manager. You’re a janitor. Try and be real when you diss
The only time you tool up is when the school wants you to clean up some piss
Depressed topical nerd unloading feelings into some new haikus
I’ll force this overgrown prick into a breakdown.. just call me blue bayou
My headquarters where I bag up, any intruders get the shotty
Your headquarters will be bagged up after I’ve finished dissecting ur body
This is all dope. Closer was close to being quoted. Breakdown was LOTB. Best verse of the round.
Vote Dave
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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