Liked Sharp's opener, the word "whole" ruined the next line for me and it was a nice concept that I think you could have done more with. Bags workout was solid. Dang, I did a capitol building line too...not feeling this one though.
User, that opener was so slickkkkk...it feels like it almost has to have been done, but it was flipped way too nice. LOTB so far. 2nd line was nice too. 3rd line, solid again. Closer meh.
I got User here.
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