This is the most I've ever seen candy drop
Candy
You style is unique take pride I that. You are so descriptive in every line and I think that's your strongest attribute as well as your down fall. This was a dope take on the topic but at times I just simply got lost. At times you wrote profound but for the most part you just rambled.
Objective
Another cool take on the topic tbh. Didn't see this Angle cimg so that's good. You painted a picture of a old lady wishing to die cuz her kids or every one around her only wants her for me money. I get that part but I feel like you failed to convince me of that narrative..
Overall
I think if candy was a bit more coherent with his meaning he would of took this i don't think objective did enough to take this battle but since candy failed to bring it all together in the end. Objective takes the win
Objective
|