Mmlp
I thought the short lines worked well for the scheme you had a nice flow going from the start although I gotta say it didn't really dive to deep into the story of tyson fury. i felt like as the verse progressed you only scratched the Surface of it you left me wanting more depth as each line ended. Don't know if that's a good thing or bad. either way this a solid outing.
Army
Man this was not impressive my dude you basically described the events of the fight in rhyme form lol. There was nothing that gave me that sense of aww. It was plain tbh with a lazy twist at the end.
Overall
You both took the obvious route in this one which is a bit disappointing cuz this topic had so much potential. I got mmlp winning cuz he gave me more to think about.
Mmlp
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