[Master Rock]

Universe-Interesting take is, to say the least...I was brought into a story about people living twice and dying twice. This was obviously very well written however the rhythm wasn't fully there at times (I found myself adding a few words in while I was spitting to fully realize the vibe but with a story like this..it is quite challenging). The waiting room was a bit astral plane/ in limbo feeling attached. I kept asking myself questions, such as: What clock is beeping? "I'm haunting your dreams" (is the character speaking or death)? The intercom? What intercom and possibly where? Is the main character dying twice and reliving her death alternatively?
This whole story was mysterious and packed a few surprises (especially the bar scene). I found it mildly entertaining in a climatic way. I like how you weaved the topic at hand and the victim to the photo with a purpose (that was done quite nicely). This verse was cinematic if I may say not quite the typical hip hop rhyme and rhythm I'm used to.

Mr. J-I never seen this side of you, very story-driven history of mankind with the vibe throughout (Dope)! Madd quotables throughout and ends it with hints to back where it has started. Your take on this verse kind of reminds me of my battle with Sral expect I can tell you really took time putting this together. But to swing it back a little this is pure madness I truly admired,

"Once again the cycle has completed its course
As we bury ourselves deep, eating the corpse.
Exchanging smiles, as we conceive and retort
As we spring back into action, leaving before...
The evening can shorten our needing for more.
As we branch out and hope to seize tomorrow.
Some are hoping to travel and meet at the shore
Falling for one another, seasoned explorers.
When their ready....then their seeds will seek to spore..."

^^There is so much to unpack here and a learning experience for some unaware of certain scientifical theories.


Both of the brothers are highly skilled creators and no doubt they brought their A-game to the table and flashed it bling, bling. If I can say it's a tie I definitely would, but if I asked the question which verse spoke to me more, it would be Mr. J's.