Eviction
As a fellow smoker I can relate to the verse
Your rhyming and content were really good at the beginning, I thought it tapered off towards the end and you were just finding rhymes and trying to decide how to end it.
That being said the piece as a whole is pretty good. I just wish you had a stronger middle and ending.
Master Rock
A diatribe against the elites, I take it? Some good rhyming in here. Scattered with a few grammatical or typo errors. I thought your theme and subject held through the entire verse, but it did get a little weaker at the end. It seemed like you were keystyling the ending.
Both good, both had some flaws and got a little weaker at the end.
I've got Rock for tackling a broader subject but this could go either way. Thanks.
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