fraze
Pretty good verse. I like the multis and it was short and sweet. Got your point across. Nothing spectacular but it's good.
It helped that your closing stanza was the strongest.
YDK
Rhyme about yourself and your life. Good multis, strong rhyming. I like this part
Yeah just take me out, I'm savin face by facin doubt
I've faced a mountain of adversity it hurts to see the clouds
Very thought out and personal.
Couple marijuana references which is cool because I like to smoke as well.
Good verse; just don't think it's enough
I just think 1 verse resonated with me more than the other and that was V Fraze in a close one.
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