[Master Rock]

Fraze from beginning to end you put me there (in the seat where us writers reside). And honestly,

"The floor a sea of crumpled pages, left bereft of hope, the levy broke,

This dam is just the damnedest, may the damned adjust to damages,
Forgive my inconsideration, don’t know where my manners is,"

^^My goodness, this was so slick!

Also, throughout you kept the pace with the wordplay and slapbacks all while sticking to the point. I honestly have nothing negative to say about this verse..just sick!

YDK, this seemed like an introspection. I got a sense that you are being literal throughout and I was thrown off by the death wish spin (got me hoping everything's ok but as time went on you explain the deteriorating nature of your youth). Beyond that statement and the other related details to that, what really stood out to me was,

"I've faced a mountain of adversity it hurts to see the clouds
The peak is just a goal but I get high to forget the lows"

This was truly a beautifully painted picture of thought (madd ill)^^.

After your spheel you brought the topic to conclusion defining your reasoning for the process and also answering the question that the reader may ask and that is: are you alright?

"I'll just reply that I'm fine.

I'm free"

Lovely ending^^.

But when it is all said and done, I am giving it to Fraze based on the formulation and the tenacity to clasp the topic and swallow it whole.