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Old 12-29-2020, 07:18 AM   #9
Adverse
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Des:

dope mags. modding prowess. but ur text is still shitty tho
u just excel in all the wrong places like in the Dilemma video
^ this was a dope little throwback, still don’t get why that bitch was texting in Microsoft Excel lol

u show up in so many forms, like some dark souls final bosses
sure. ur record’s nice, but how many of them wins were also like... ur losses?
^ I didn’t really get this. And the setup was weird

i’m nice with the blade. u will fuck around & get urself murdered
come within 6 feet of des u getting poked faster than frontline health workers
^ okay

ur girl stays beggin for real dick. dunno how u managed to throw in a baby
it’s a known fact jamie got stuck with a small wonder like that show in the 80s
^ this was good

des is tight with moms. keep a room ready in case she’s flown in quick
‘matt reside’ in a home only cause he took that <<< path to ownership
^ this is a bold claim bar but I like the wordplay and implication

if nose size correlated to dick size, it would be clear u were made for porn
ur the only cat who can wake up and smell the coffee...that ur mom drank on the day u were born
^ lmao I don’t know this visual is crazy and it’s funny but I wouldn’t say it hit

got the shotty cocked for u & ready to blast off nine or ten in hatred
when desvon sawa get off the buss..u still end up dead like final destination
^ no no no.

i’m a text demon. enter in flames & when i leave, ur left bleeding
so if u hear jamie tell you to run, shit! she won’t be talking bout next season
^ this was okay, decent close.

Zuch:
You sell phone accessories? Lol, there’s no credit in store
An SD card only has 16 gigs, but every one of them is better than yours
^ good opener liked it

Your bitch a slut, she takes HIV cocks to the face
If I smash that burner, it’s with a hammer, like I’m trying to keep cops off my trace
^ cool again

I had your job at 18, the money ain’t fit for the pros
Your accountant wasn’t mistaken when he described your net income as ‘gross’
^ haha alright

Zuch don’t play, I leave craniums bleeding
Semi splits your dome into sections, find my bullets in stadium seating
^ this was okay

Get a new career, go without the tragedy man
Wife queefed your unborn into a shitter, don’t talk to me about a family plan
^ ouchhh. Hard hitting and a personal

Even as a miscarriage we couldn’t tell it was yours
How does a ‘wireless expert’ let his own fetus strangle itself with a cord?
^ rough again. Ha
Your girl large too, sex is tough with where her stomach is
Body structured like a home loan, takes 30 years to get out from under it
^ lmaooo felt like a “yo mama” joke

Des a nobody, a fast death is reason to stare
But his disappearance will take more than 60 minutes


..or Dateline, to get people to care
^ ehhhh it was okayish


We all know how dope Des is it’s not a question but this was a rushed verse and honestly Zuch came out swinging he was personal and had consistently good bars so he won this one pretty handily imo.
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