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Originally Posted by UserName
Nope, never happened, who gave this brother acid?
If you choked on my dick any more, I’d have to name it Summer Classic
harsh but simple
And that match with Zuch was absolutely littered with pit falls
Next time you go 60, make it miles per hour, & into a brick wall
this is ok
You’re a short, tiny-footed, fake bachelor faggot
That hairline’s all a show & it stops behind your ears like amateur magic
kinda ok, kinda light. concept is cool but punch is lacking
Not to drive a wedge, but we both give ur wife the gnarly goods
We got the same technique, but your gear’s a lot smaller like Charlie Woods
had to look up charlie. light punch
Been plotting your demise, quit begging me to make it stop
I’ve got a “sure, fire” plan... when the hitman asks if he can take the shot
this is ok
What in the Dickens? Yeah, Charles wrote about a sick, hurt kid
But his Tiny Tim ain’t half as sad as the pair you’ve gotta slide inserts in
not sure what this was
It’s like you’re crafting music, I’m all for it, rock on bud
Cuz ur verses lead more people to bridges than a good pop song does
ok. light
Blood in his urine, loose teeth, Imma beat ya dead
But there’s nothing I can do to him he can’t blame on his Propecia meds
kinda funny. this is cool
Condoms never fit him, his dick gets compared to Cheetos
Bro, you’re never reaching that Reservoir tip again, like Tarantino
funny but wording is slightly off w/ again
Stays drinking hard seltzer’s, loves it when it hits his tongue
This guys a Claw machine, and the size of a prize that you can win from one
wording is off. concept is ok
Your wife used to be loyal, wanted the kids, house, and the stash
Now our plan’s finally coming together, and watching it drip out of her ass
funny
Lying about his Peloton, you shouldn’t share stuff, my friend
Please, the only conditioning you do is after visits to Hair Club For Men
funny but light
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Quotes: go 60, sure fire plan, Propecia, coming together
Close: Summer Classic, amateur magic, Charlie Woods, pop song, Reservoir tip, Claw machine, closer
A lot of good concepts. This is a nice verse but it was held back in a few places by wording that felt rushed and light punches. I only had one legit miss which is impressive for 12 bars. A lot of creativity, props for a dropping a good read.
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
i admit it UPN. you’ve really brought a vibe to the sector
congrats to Zuch for champin, Dave for verses of the week. & User for the .500 record
funny but still a light jab
think ur the heart of The Tropics cuz you shout ‘teamwork’ hoe?
yeahhh man you’re the Key...we roll our eyes at in the chat like “reword bro”
wordy for what you did with this.
ironic you ran from UPN lookin’ like SUCH a coward..
cuz committing to switchboards is also why you make $12 bucks an hour
funny. cool wp
i give my friends advice so their lives can thrive..
when tony weighs in on something he takes a second glance then dies inside
funny. kinda mean
i’m a gifted singer, live a passionate life
Tony’s got pipes too. zuchs in his left hand & fracs in his right
flip is there but not feeling this. punch is corny to me
striking out on tinder has reallly left this guy defeated
it’s time to beat it. if User wants to see Sparks Fly he needs to go & drive a Prius
concept is ok. think you could have worded this better
Tony gun bars?! we’ve never seen your waist with a gat punk
we only think ur Carrying cuz one look at ya belly screams eight & a half months
this is ok
scope locked. i’m perched up stalkin’ the scene
when i see his dome i’m ‘picking off the hair’ like User dropping a wing
light to me
it’s 2020 & if we meet up on the street to get raw..
only curbside pickup you'll be dealing w/ then are ur teeth & your jaw
this is cool
fuck you whitey i don’t need to let the Wesson spray..
give you the George Floyd treatment, neon your neck like a techno rave
cool flip.
sex is something he never will masta
i called his ex, she said the rigatonis so small it resembles the pasta
cool wp but stretched to me as worded
you worked in a urinalysis lab? HA i’m glad you gave ur notice fam
asked ppl to ‘fill up the cup’ & u’ll do the same in 10 years as a homeless man
this is too straight forward for me
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Quotes: switchboards, weighs in, carrying, curbside pickup, neon your neck
Close: UPN opener, got pipes, sparks fly, rigatonis
This was also a nice read. Curbside pickup was LOTB to me, weighs in and neon also standouts. Your quotes hit a little harder to me in general than User's. But also had more misses (reword, picking off the hair, closer).
Vote: Blue Bayou I read Users verse and thought he gave Blue space to walk away the win, but Blue had more misses than I'm used to seeing from him. Hard battle to call. I have User with a edge on consistency, but Blue has harder punches. This is really going to come down to style preference. Both had some really creative concepts, but I think I liked Blue's concepts+execution slightly better. I think User actually had more good concepts but let the wording slip on a couple that would have been quotes. Both are great writers, so this is about as close as it comes to as tie in my book as possible. But if only one can win, I would pick Blue for harder hits.