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This is a lot to read but going to read more as time passes. Thoroughly enjoy the imagery and creativity, however... Brush tf up sentences like these sometime: "He was once the son of a nobel family but his family was accused of a political crime was all executed saved for him and his caretaker." That was horrendous to read, lol.

Besides that, as a DM in DnD this is dope af. I like the backstory of the supreme beggar, and halfway through the story language seems to pick up as well. Looking forward to take a closer look at your other characters and feuds you're building up for.