Dull Boy... At least feed his shit, come on now...
That said, cool to see you posting Veritas. Cool content, could need a bit of polishing up on the rhyme and excess syllable department. Concepts are there, just gotta tidy them sentences up a lil. This piece got potential but could do with some extra polishing
Edit: I retract that stuff I said to you Dull Boy, I know why you did what you did now, lol
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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Last edited by Objective; 12-20-2020 at 11:49 PM.
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