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Originally Posted by evaD
That whole outfit proves this fool never Mack it
I Haven’t seen red over camo looking so ugly since full metal jacket
something is off to me about the wording but this still hits. creative.
You can judge a man by his surroundings and seeing those cars I know it’s over
Just look at that run down piece of trash in red AND the wreck over his shoulder
should have moved this away from the opener. these punches are too similar they steal impact from each other. misdirection punch is ok
And I don’t give a shit what he say
He’s only stood in a dirt lot because he bought those kicks on eBay
this is light
Scraped into the playoffs, now this big softy needs some luck
He fought tooth and nail to get here?! those items could probably beat him up
could probably - passive writing is bad. punch is light
Not even a pair of new kicks.. That’s the outfit I’ma bury you with
Felled by a foreigner; Tell the coroner he’ll be there in two ticks
i don't see a punch, my b if i missed it. rhyme is cool
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Quotes: full metal jacket
Close: piece of trash in red
You usually drop harder than this, the verse feels rushed. I also feel like you could have done more with the pic. It feels weird you didn't touch the Christmas tree at all. Full metal was your best bar, didn't have a lot else.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Adverse
Everybody else gives you praise but I’ll give you endless caps dude
Say u a legend in the making..till ur gettin carved with the metal like that Hendrix statue
kinda obvious but well executed.
And BELIEVE if it comes to hands this bitch gettin killed
Spotty ass beard...uppercuts give that ‘patch work’ till dude need more stitches than quilts
wording in the punch is a little long but this still works
Knock you to the street with ease, you’re a guy I can tell ain’t macho
Y’all ain’t seen ‘a bitch get drug over bricks’ like this since Griselda Blanco
i like the concept but the flip doesn't work both ways as worded.
Dave’s a fucking bum bruh and that get-up lends facts to my claim
After they snapped the pic he sat down, shook that cup n started askin for change
funny. a little light but cool
I’m a wildcard fam cuz it wouldn’t take much for me to be a threat in this bitch
Dave’s a wildcard, too. I Can’t tell if he’s a Justin Bieber Stan or a lesbian chick
nah
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Quotes: Hendrix, patch work
Close: Griselda, asking for change
Ok verse. No haymakers but the only real miss was the closer. I really wanted to like the Griselda Blanco bar, nice idea. Don't know what was up with that closer.
Vote: Adverse Feel like evaD could have made this closer, he definitely has the skill to compete, but the verse this week falls short. Adverse had a consistent drop, that neither over or underwhelmed. Nice pic battle.