OE bar was dope af, and LOTB. The rest of the verse was okay at best. Some basic jabs. Seems like you wanted to play it safe.
Des was more consistent. Opener was my fav line. Thought it was funny. The just friends bar did not work but it was a good try lol. Heartbeat was cool too. The rest you at least attempted some cool angles, which was enough.
Vote Des
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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