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Old 12-17-2020, 04:54 PM   #3
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beats groovy & i like your energy on it

i fuck with the delivery tbh - i say that, cause it's weird, unclean, unpolished, & i dont particularly enjoy the tone (i dont dislike it though) - but it all kind of works for them same reasons.

i thought the actual verse has very little redeemable about it though;

food for thought - bar is a lunch
dream in rhyme schemes
sick, aint showing - chadwick boseman
deep water - michael phelps

all shits i cant stand tbh. & the couple lines i liked were just aiight.

thought the hook worked though.
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