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Old 12-17-2020, 11:22 AM   #8
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Woah, YDK packed so much in 1/3 of what his opponent concocted. YDK verse was stylistick and internal and hit the topic on the head which closed out nicely.
Diablo on the hand fleshed out a cohesive narrative an individual that is going through some serious ailing effects (which I am not sure if the character even knows what is causing this) and I would like to know where it stems from. Their is a journey throughout which paints a vivid picture in certain instances which places the reader within this journey and when our main character gets to their destination the topic photo comes alive in the conclusion which was impressive.
First time I ever read any of YDK's work and I look forward to more.
This is a tough decision...
However YDK's verse seems like a little more could he been piled in simply because I as a reader wanted more. As for D, once the verse was completed I accepted the finality of it.

Therefore I am giving it to D.
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