[Master Rock]

Universe, upon second read it became more apparent and his opening line didn't strike me but next line tapped me. Interesting thing is you have to read it twice for the beginning to make sense to you if you have a love for the particular directorial style of a director of cinema. First part is a dedication to the film maker. However, I understand that back and forth but I was not quite feeling the initial disruption, it broke me away from the vibe and I am all about the vibe. However, after it becomes more cohesive in nature to to product. The ending didn't touch me as much, is it a true story because I have no idea? But it is an interesting take, no the less.
Now MMLP,
right off the back I question what is up what this opening Simpson line (like this better not be no random toss in). But it wasn't, I entertained by the progression and the references throughout. Plenty of calculated metaphoric jabs in wordplay throughout. However, once her journey of the world took place the world that painted began to fade (now can that relate to the topic at hand on how the fun, colorful world dries out and begins to fall?). What is most intriguing is that Lisa (I would assume) has broke from the childhood dream and met the tragic fate the reality can present with can take the color out of the world and leave you feeling hollow to tears.
This was very difficult at first to decide my vote but upon further reflection the end is reflected in MMLP's work while the beginning is formulated in Universe's verse.
Therefore I am giving it to MMLP due to the story of color diminishing into a grey fade of hollowing.