Universe
An interesting Inception piece.
Your flow and rhyme are on point as usual.
I was a little confused as to what Arthur and Nash were trying to accomplish, but other than that I followed pretty well. I have seen the movie. And the end is an interesting loop of the idea for the screenplay.
This wasn't as gripping as some of your past stories (to me), but it still did the job in entertaining and wanting to see what comes next. Will be tough to beat.
MMLP
Was a big Simpsons fan in their earlier days so I caught all the wordplay references: groening, snowball, burns to smithereens, and a few others.
We are presented with a Lisa growing up and getting married, but dejected for some reason-- we only find out at the end with the stillborn shocker.
Flow and rhymes on point as usual.
You did a good job describing her character and traits and aspirations.
You have been facing top notch competition because AGAIN although I kinda want to vote for you here, I just think Universe had a really complete and developed story and he matched you from a technical standpoint.
So that said, V Universe, but I expect MMLP to rebound and eventually have another champ match if he keeps it up.
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