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Old 12-16-2020, 03:00 PM   #6
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man i loved it, the dream steps one two was dope and done well, it flowed nice and processed itself at a natural rate.. the story was super cool and your vocab was calm and hot.. all in all a great piece my main man thanks.. even the characters were cool..

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dude the simpson thing was dope i mean a little childish on some flipped lines but pothers just really worked for you.. smithereens. was the pay off i think because it made it worth all the name drops.. rhyming and structure was actually your best front man you one uped universe on that.. all in all though it was a lil to simple for such a massive drop from universe.. cool story though bra..

vote = universe just a lil more depth to it gl guys
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