I got Fraze here
Better than your last couple verses. Wording is more crisp and you’re simplifying your concepts. All good things.
Eviction you were decent here. It just not enough in the stand out department. Didn’t have any haymakers which hurts extremely overall. Just a bunch of jabs that were slight hits or miss.
Vote Fraze
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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