Wand -
My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it
violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch
Opener was a bit simple, the smash angle is fine, but you could've done more with it. Sewing line was a no. undeveloped features was a decent attempt at a good miscarriage line, but it fell flat with your wording.
Des -
we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts
give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one
fire barr was probably LOTB for me. The opening counter was niiice as well. The others weren't as strong, and nobody should do wand/magic lines anymore - but still - solid verse, and enough to win it in my eyes.
Cool battle guys, good luck in the playoffs
V - Des
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