Swerve -
Dagger precise as a needle, this cancer is past fucked,
I’ll wipe this disease from the earth so quick, Pfizer and Modena go bankrupt.
Too cold to hold, I’ll end your life don’t get it mistaken bruh,
If you’re feeling Randy, Savage – here’s a Flying Elbow for your trachea.
Swerve’ll break your back, spine in two, I could go on and on,
I’ll leave that column so beaten and damaged it’ll look like the Parthenon.
Those were your strongest to me. Chase Young was a solid idea, execution fell flat though. doctorate's a bit of an old wp, the flip was cool, but overall felt light in the punch. Ouch angle has been sorta done to death this year. trees, rafters and gallows was cool, i usually enjoy a good list punch, but this felt a little on the lazy side. still, overall, solid verse, you incorproate the setup into the punch well, and obviously know what you're doing.
Doc Savage -
not bout street life. never keeps packs or squeeze gats
if we talkin numbers on this characters sheet, it's from rolling D&D stats
blue, uni, pulse, kung.. fuck even barcs making the tier
how you in the top 5 active when you're not even top 5 canadian here?
eagle ON the hip - leave Patrick's crew shot to shit
you'll see metal pop out the Desert faster than the Utah monolith
my team walked by & seen ya wife by a street stop sign
said ur Ds small fry; we fit the right inches in her walls like them sheetrock guys
Laney Boggs wp was wtf-levels of no, lmao. Like, congrats on making it make sense, but that doesn't make it a banger. exoskeleton was also a no for me. cutting phase was just done by Zuch the week before last, and Alex Jones was light. That all said, Monolith was LOTB for me and I've got you with one more quote i liked than Swerve.
Cool battle, enjoyable read.
V - Savage
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