Quote:
Originally Posted by Swerve
Dagger precise as a needle, this cancer is past fucked,
I’ll wipe this disease from the earth so quick, Pfizer and Modena go bankrupt.
this is cool. end rhyme is a lil sloppy but the concept is fresh
Too cold to hold, I’ll end your life don’t get it mistaken bruh,
If you’re feeling Randy, Savage – here’s a Flying Elbow for your trachea.
this is smooth. like the wording
You’re a rookie at this shit, this pedo’ll end up in a ditch,
He’s known to Chase Young…and even the NFL player thinks you’re a bitch.
not feeling this
Switchblade shows you’re bitchmade, that verse aint got no promise,
If they say doctorate up, its the one on the wall at his gynecologist’s office.
wp is ok. punch feels a little light, but this is creative
When it comes to girls, you get none…your dating life toast,
This dude begging for the link so often that Ouch started taking notes.
this is meh to me
Swerve’ll break your back, spine in two, I could go on and on,
I’ll leave that column so beaten and damaged it’ll look like the Parthenon.
simple but effective. liked this
Messiah when I spit, every verse is practically hallow,
And I’ll leave you hanging on every word…tree, rafters and gallows.
this is ok. maybe could have hit harder with diff setup but still cool
Clips are endless, pull that hammer back and spray,
Doc’ll get a barrel treatment so long, his blood’ll turn to Cabernet.
this is ok
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Quotes: Pfizer/Moderna, Randy Savage, Parthenon, hanging on every word, barrel treatment
Close: doctorate up
Nice verse man, you have some bars. Good wording, clever concepts, you did your thing. Maybe could have quoted doctorate wp, but it hit kinda light to me.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Doc Savage
try to ride w/ the big boys & our text scene falls back
when Swerve gets IN my Laney Boggs it down; Freddie Prinze in 'She's All That'
not really a fan
this raw facts, paralysis sloweddd ur back movement
battlings not ur strong suit, the exoskeleton for what ur spine CAN'T do is
this is cool
not bout street life. never keeps packs or squeeze gats
if we talkin numbers on this characters sheet, it's from rolling D&D stats
this is ok
my diet plans are killer though. at 14% fat I drop weight
swerves cut phase in the teens left a memory of scars in his goth days
on the fence about this one. but like the creativity
blue, uni, pulse, kung.. fuck even barcs making the tier
how you in the top 5 active when you're not even top 5 canadian here?
ok personal. too statementish for me
eagle ON the hip - leave Patrick's crew shot to shit
you'll see metal pop out the Desert faster than the Utah monolith
this is ok
my team walked by & seen ya wife by a street stop sign
said ur Ds small fry; we fit the right inches in her walls like them sheetrock guys
not a fan
every morning she hears u bitch cause ur a known loser
u 'woke - on the wrong side' & she's in fo' war like an Alex Jones truther
kinda ok, kinda light
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Quotes: exoskeleton, characters sheet, cut phase, utah monolith
Close: Alex Jones
Liked the exoskeleton bar, that was nice. Had a couple misses mixed in, but overall a cool verse.
Vote: Swerve I have swerve taking this by a quote. Good battle on both sides, looking forward to reading more from you.