Wait… who are you again?
Impatient, waiting on edge. Am I off base? Guess I’ll lead with tha steel first.
Fuck leaving ya feels hurt. After my blades ‘interim’… they’re gonna put in some REAL work.
this is decent, not fan of the execution though
Such a failure with the ladies. They can’t stand to see this creep up close.
You don’t link with hos. You couldn’t get inbox if girls joined the league and needed votes
not feeling this bro, too simple and lacks sting
Bitch, you’re a Karen. I know ya not the gunner type.
If we meet on the street… you’ll be terrified, grasp your purse tight and walk to the other side
ok I see where you were heading with this but the wording is off
Wanna see me hang? Jealous from counting ways I’m better?
Go get a klansman…English lit major from Grambling...and pay him cheddar…
Bet you still can’t string a fraze together…
stretched approach to a np
I’m a beast enclosed in the square, circling close to bring heat to your dome
Can’t compete blow for blow... you couldn’t land a haymaker touring a farming machinery show
not fan of these kind of bars tbh
Bulletproofed the red rover. And I’m sweeeervin’, cause I’m not sober.
Even if you ‘link with your arms connect it’ won’t stop me from running your squad over.
okk
Got no time for patients. So I’m quick to put shots in your frame.
Not here to nurse your pride, so fuck your name/brand… these generics will fix you the same.
nope
overall fraze you got an unique style, I wouldn't change it, but bars sometimes get too wordy and I normally expect some witty to counter the line length, I probably would work on executing your concepts more cleanly so it lands smoothly in the reader's mind. I dig your style though but some more time battling and getting feed will definitely help you shape your style, atleast that's what happens on my side
vs.
I'll end this quick cuz I'm supposed to be home
Just pull the 9 back and let it off like a rotary phone
are we gonna pretend this isnt played.. smooth approach tho
Mob shit. I'm aimin for your head the way you speakin.
I'll shoot ya in ur living room.. landlord can't stop ur roof from leakin.
okk
You the hardest to please nd you gettin people emotional
Guess u could say ur 'marked fraze' but none of ur shit is quotable
okk
We all trash in comparison to you plz grace us now for views
Bro... I'ma go to this parallel universe you live in and slap the shit out of you.
nah
You a clown. Aint got it down cuz you walk a Tight Rope surface
If we say you performed well its just cause we tryna find u a circus
nah not feeling this
A fighter. I'm only a writer part time you don't want to fist off
I'll throw u up against the chains so much ppl thought it was disc golf
ok
And when I send a dog to your face we already know thats killer
When u send a dog to your face you got ur phone up w/ a snapchat filter.
nahh bro not feeling this
I got ispaz, with one or two more hits
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