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Old 12-05-2020, 07:19 PM   #10
Swerve
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Battle Record: 40-34


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- Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians)
- Fight Night LXIV
- Netcees Battle League

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Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered
& now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here
Ill break ya ribs in, make your chin split
An uppercut will have this challenger mid air exploding on some '86 shit
Ya chicks clit looks like a portal. Shes had many dicks
Lost my rubber in her.. Hoffa will be found before that jimmy is

piped down and record stinks were awful, but the quoted 3 were solid. wording on challenger made it tight. otherwise consistently ok.

vs.

If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it
u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit
U want fans on NC but who the fuck is this geek?
G’luck tryna jumpstart a following when u probs get followed & jumped every week
Ur winning never. Grab the tools & ur shit’ll sever
Givin’ u no chance. Middle-aged romance; these 2 40’s spark til they click together

the two lines I quoted first were very nice. bottled line was killed on execution but was almost there. the misses were a lot bigger than Fracs though - like that hit it off line was just awful. the click 40s idea was dope, but their was no punch.

V/ Frac
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