Just keep writing. Your wording isn’t bad. Seen plenty of guys that have no hope whatsoever. You’re not one of those. You have the ability to write dope. The best thing I could recommend is to try to do one thing good at a time. Focus on being witty. Once you’re comfortable with that, focus on having your punches hit as hard as possible. You can do this by wording it a few diff ways and then reading it back to yourself and choose the one that sounds best to you. If you are writing a line one time and putting it in your verse I can guarantee it’s not as good as it can be. Keep tinkering.
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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