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Originally Posted by Fracture
Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered
& now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here
this is cool
You dont have bad ideas but youre sorry with words
A good wand verse is a needle in a haystack, that a junkie already searched
cool idea. this almost misses to me without saying 'find' somewhere, but i'll give it to you
Keep you alive until everyone you knows souls vanquished
Bury ya crew.. Now u like garth, got friends in low places
ok. kinda light
He a pussy whos forever inside and never wins fights
You aint about the hard knocks.. This rapist prefers the element of surprise
this doesn't rhyme to me and the wording feels off. concept is ok.
Ill break ya ribs in, make your chin split
An uppercut will have this challenger mid air exploding on some '86 shit
nice concept. wording is just good enough to make it hit
Ya chicks clit looks like a portal. Shes had many dicks
Lost my rubber in her.. Hoffa will be found before that jimmy is
this is cool and very creative but not the hardest hitting punch.
After one sniff you can tell that bitch is just spoilin
Yea I still piped her down, at least the pieces of her that fit in the toilet
this is ok. pieces bars are over done but piped her down was a fresh flip
Its so sad... Wands nbl run looks more like awkward steps
Your record stinks.. Ill use it to throw the homicide detectives off my scent
don't like your wording but this is still cool
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Quotes: dementia/wanderer, needle/junkie, challenger, piped her down
Close: garth, jimmy hoffa, record stinks
You have some dope ideas, I can't really front on you. Stylistically I don't like the way you angle some of your punches but you consistently bring fresh concepts so keep doing you.
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Originally Posted by Wanderer
Fuck ya brewed up feelings. Act cool but we can smell tears
More than bottled up emotions.. they been aged in a barrel for at least 12 yrs
i see brewed/bottled/barrel but this isn't worded harsh enough for me. saying he was holding back emotions for 12 years isn't really a diss
Nothing scares me.. No crew or cartel, yo
To be Blunt.. ur in over ya head with an assassin like she was in Sicario
get the Blunt flip. similar name flips have been done. over ya head with an assassin is a ok angle, but its a pretty light diss
Im dope.. this snitch’s soft bars have never been fire
I must confess; shit u say makes me seem even more killa like ya wearing a wire
i don't get this wordplay to be honest. maybe i'm dumb, but usually that means its a stretch anyway
If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it
u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit
this is dope. one of my favorite lines this week
U want fans on NC but who the fuck is this geek?
G’luck tryna jumpstart a following when u probs get followed & jumped every week
'probs' waters down your punch. bar is also kinda light.
We won’t get along & that’s a statement of pure facts
If I ever hit it off with u it’s a piece of ya cranium with my bat
wording is a little awkward. hit it off is pretty simple
Kill u on ur travels. U created this situation..
So when my last resort is violence urs is the next place u go on vacation
i don't like the way you worded the punch but this is still cool
Ur winning never. Grab the tools & ur shit’ll sever
Givin’ u no chance. Middle-aged romance; these 2 40’s spark til they click together
idea is ok. 2 guns clicking together is light as a punch
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Quotes: Beelines, last resort
Close: opener, Blunt, middle aged romance
You have some nice bars in here but there were a couple things that were light to me with the angle you took on them. aged in a barrel, over ya head, click together.... all were cool concepts to me that weren't worded harsh enough to outweigh the punches from Fracture.
Vote: Fracture I have Fracture with more quotes here. Dude has a lot of fresh concepts, he didn't leave a lot of room for mistakes. Wanderer had a nice verse but a couple misses is enough to make you lose against this kind of competition.