Ispaz got this
Wording was smooth amd concepts better than normal this time around. You improved a lot over the season.
Disc golf dope
Closer was cool.
Fraze
Wordplays were too simple. I’m not a fan of wordplay so they have to be fresh.
Everything else a little statementish like the haymaker and Karen bar
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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Last edited by UPN Zuch; 12-04-2020 at 06:43 AM.
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