Quote:
Originally Posted by Scout
Ima fire hooks into ye head and cheek. Start well
Leave the top of your i more crooked than the medellín cartels
start well is an awkward end rhyme. that aside, this is a really cool concept. punch is well done but the way you set this up is weird.
Just because im white hot, the site wants to question/sway
But my alias is forbidden...like your illiterate wife on election day
this is a stretch to me. even being illiterate, she's not writing in Biden's name, she's checking a box. stuttering might have worked tho
Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
this is cool
That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
i also liked this
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield
this is clever
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users
meh. too simple for me
You may be a cool guy, but you have pull why? Lame
You're involved in enough inside jobs to become a full time maid;
ok. a little light
Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot...
There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot
ok
But everything I'm involved in HAS to be clicked, guy..
So this'll be more widespread than your asshole if ya actually did time
not a fan
|
Quotes: medallion, cell block, bucky lasek, groening, reservations
Close: forbidden, inside jobs
Opener was cool, really liked nose manual and simpsons concepts. A couple misses but this was definitely a nice verse.
Quote:
Originally Posted by UPN Zuch
Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
ok. light to me.
I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit
Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit
not feeling this
I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me
It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity
you're supposed to do this sniff test first bruh. this is ok, still kinda simple
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
did we really just do two parts flips in a row? i like this one a little better, but they steal impact from each other
I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug
You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood
thought this was cool
That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state
Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways
this is nice
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse
this is fresh
Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact
@ Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that
i'm probably missing personals or something, this is light to me
“Dope” “this is awesome!” Trust me she’s sick of caring
That’s not a battle review by Jamie, this time it’s your obituary
this is ok |
Quotes: throwing up blood, touched, bad rash, obituary
Close: Body of the Month, gang activity, funeral director
This is a nice verse. I thought you started slow but you had a string of heaters in the second half. People have been doing pieces/parts bars to death for the last few weeks, putting two in one verse is a kinda overkill to me.
Vote: Scout So I should probably vote for Zuch and not hear shit from people but I have them both with 7 mentions and Scout has more quotes. obituary and reservations were light quotes for me so I could see going either way on those, so I just counted them both. In terms of creativity medallin, bucky lasek, and groening were stand outs vs bad rash for Zuch. Zuch has better wording, but simpler concepts. It might be a style preference thing (or not liking the parts bars), Zuch you're a dope writer but I think he got you.