I wasn’t feeling jays wording. A lot of extra words that threw the timing and flow off. Concepts were good as usual, I just feel you could do more with them.
Ispaz doesn’t have the greatest angles but he worded his smoother and it hit more that way. Was a close battle.
Good shit guys
Vote spaz
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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