Dave one of my favorite writers.
With that said, he keyed this one. It’s not up to his level at all. I know you signed out and are busy and I get that. Thank you for showing up though. Some decent stuff but like I said, just not your standard.
INF opener was cool, your verse was structured well and you had some heat that wasn’t as complicated as normal.
Good battle guys. Sorry partner Dave.
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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