Scout -
Nobody cares what your stupid posse went and re-played
Talentwise, I'm the next generation. U atari's centipede game
ok, more simplified than my preference. 6/10
I'll hijack ya style and only man it doper too...
My use of 'single quotation marks' will rival the lonely fans that vote for you.
the wording toward the beginning of the bar could've been better, but cool idea. 7/10
It's easy to mimic a boring weirdo softy....
The only 'delicate matter I cover' will be the remains of your 40 year old body.
this is solid, but calling him delicate just kind of takes the edge off the bar. 7/10
Shotty got your security rebuilt up in the sky...
Gone from 'whole guard to half guard' quicker than anderson silva in his prime.
i like this, wording couldve been a little stronger but dope/original idea. blue does have a point about the scenario, but still 9/10
Leaving mommy, you & all the kids broken;
I'm causing more 'breakdowns with tissues' than the human body mid-covid.
nah not really feeling this, just feels like rehashed old concepts. 7/10
I write facts. So like, yeah. I'm folding all....
This will be more of a 'one sided affair' than what your wife has in holey stalls.
holey stalls is a weird phrasing, the idea is there but it missed for me. 7/10
Yes I'm editing. Usually you is the quickest...
Now you're 'struggling with counter measures' like user redoing his kitchen.
idea is a bit dated but the flip is good. 8/10
Seems suddenly you're scared to face this?
Probably a 'touchy subject' but I'll be giving free hugs in the interrogation.
not feeling this 6/10
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Ajax -
We’re all REALLY concerned about your mental fitness and health…
I feel bad, but nothing I say could be worse than the shit you just did to yourself.
not digging it, 6/10
You’ll never catch a real veteran obsessing…
Fuck how many times you view your own threads; that trash’ll NEVER be refreshing.
i like this, and its a solid personal tie-in 9/10
No one likes or respects you. Your writing’s a joke…
My first gear is Maximum Overdrive; You got your poetic license revoked.
the connection between these ideas feels too weak but wording's clean 7/10
Plus, we ALL know my pimp game is ultimate...
While your girl’s ‘extremely revolting.’ Her street nickname is Bolshevik.
wording toward throughout the set-up couldve been better but i like this 9/10
Her handler must’ve deprived that beast of oxygen…
Your latest achievement in life was unlocking the cage they keep that goblin in.
nah this felt like filler 6/10
I’m on Billboards, Scout. They cut your mic when you start to tell ya story…
Your alias is perfect. Your work’s ‘peaking in uncharted territory.’
i like the general idea, but the execution/wording fell flat 7/10
I write like a ‘man possessed.’ Every verse is ascendant...
You wouldn’t ‘feel free to speak’ to me after passage of the Thirteenth Amendment.
nah the connection here doesn't make any sense. the 13th amendment doesnt give anyone a right to speak. they were slaves, not mimes. The man possessed idea has legs but you could've done more with it 6/10
Your bitch is huge. I’ll drop that hefty lady, seriously.
She’ll be buried in a more ‘massive plot’ than Oliver Stone’s JFK conspiracy.
execution couldve been better and ive seen the idea done a lot, and this didn't really put a new spin on it 7/10
ajax - 57/80
scout - 57/80
v/ tie because it doesnt matter
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