Dave
Hit the ground running was cool
Top punches / infinite was dope to me
Heads nor tails was an almost..
The first 2 I quoted were the standouts. Not the best verse I’ve seen from you. However, it was all smooth and read well
Inf
Sun angles was cool
Romantic dinner was cool
Inf your creativity is crazy and this verse was a better one from you but they were the only two I was feeling. I can’t get over your wording at times.. particularly set ups. It’s like sometimes they just don’t make sense grammatically and are forced to either rhyme, be short or tie in with your punch.
I think this was a close battle but on preference I’m giving the edge to v/evaD
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