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Originally Posted by Scout
Nobody cares what your stupid posse went and re-played
Talentwise, I'm the next generation. U atari's centipede game
too straightforward for me. maybe if you set this up with game references, but this a pretty simple comparison
I'll hijack ya style and only man it doper too...
My use of 'single quotation marks' will rival the lonely fans that vote for you.
meh. can't take this seriously when you guys share the same voter pool
It's easy to mimic a boring weirdo softy....
The only 'delicate matter I cover' will be the remains of your 40 year old body.
this is boring to me (no offense intended)
Shotty got your security rebuilt up in the sky...
Gone from 'whole guard to half guard' quicker than anderson silva in his prime.
this is pretty cool.
Leaving mommy, you & all the kids broken;
I'm causing more 'breakdowns with tissues' than the human body mid-covid.
cool concept but your wording is awkward.
I write facts. So like, yeah. I'm folding all....
This will be more of a 'one sided affair' than what your wife has in holey stalls.
funnyish
Yes I'm editing. Usually you is the quickest...
Now you're 'struggling with counter measures' like user redoing his kitchen.
flip is there but punch is light to me.
Seems suddenly you're scared to face this?
Probably a 'touchy subject' but I'll be giving free hugs in the interrogation.
this doesn't even attempt to rhyme. feel like you could have done more with this concept
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Quotes: whole guard/half guard, breakdowns with tissues, one sided affair
Close: centipede
You slipped some cool bars in the middle but it trailed off to me at both ends. nice verse overall.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ajax
We’re all REALLY concerned about your mental fitness and health…
I feel bad, but nothing I say could be worse than the shit you just did to yourself.
too light
You’ll never catch a real veteran obsessing…
Fuck how many times you view your own threads; that trash’ll NEVER be refreshing.
don't like this
No one likes or respects you. Your writing’s a joke…
My first gear is Maximum Overdrive; You got your poetic license revoked.
this is ok. isn't very harsh
Plus, we ALL know my pimp game is ultimate...
While your girl’s ‘extremely revolting.’ Her street nickname is Bolshevik.
meh. i see the idea, a little bit of a stretch to me
Her handler must’ve deprived that beast of oxygen…
Your latest achievement in life was unlocking the cage they keep that goblin in.
not feeling this
I’m on Billboards, Scout. They cut your mic when you start to tell ya story…
Your alias is perfect. Your work’s ‘peaking in uncharted territory.’
this is nice
I write like a ‘man possessed.’ Every verse is ascendant...
You wouldn’t ‘feel free to speak’ to me after passage of the Thirteenth Amendment.
ok i guess
Your bitch is huge. I’ll drop that hefty lady, seriously.
She’ll be buried in a more ‘massive plot’ than Oliver Stone’s JFK conspiracy.
decent
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Quotes: peaking in uncharted territory
Close: poetic license, bolshevik, 13th ammendment, JFK conspiracy
Not sure what happened this week, I usually don't read this many lines as misses from you. Verse started a little slow and you didn't have many punches that stood out to me as executed, though you did pick some cool concepts.
Vote: Scout both dudes are nice writers but i think Scout did enough to take this.