Scout
Bitch STFU!
Nobody cares what your stupid posse went and re-played
Talentwise, I'm the next generation. U atari's centipede game
Meh
I'll hijack ya style and only man it doper too...
My use of 'single quotation marks' will rival the lonely fans that vote for you.
Above avg
It's easy to mimic a boring weirdo softy....
The only 'delicate matter I cover' will be the remains of your 40 year old body.
With more effort in the setup this would be fire. Punch is nice though
Shotty got your security rebuilt up in the sky...
Gone from 'whole guard to half guard' quicker than anderson silva in his prime.
Ehhhh
Leaving mommy, you & all the kids broken;
I'm causing more 'breakdowns with tissues' than the human body mid-covid.
Clever
I write facts. So like, yeah. I'm folding all....
This will be more of a 'one sided affair' than what your wife has in holey stalls.
This is ok, set up seems lazy though
Yes I'm editing. Usually you is the quickest...
Now you're 'struggling with counter measures' like user redoing his kitchen.
Ok
Seems suddenly you're scared to face this?
Probably a 'touchy subject' but I'll be giving free hugs in the interrogation.
Wtf
Decent verse. I'd mix the style up more, every punch started feeling very similar about halfway through to the end, especially with the quotes. Improving your setups, whether through wit or rhyme would go a long way too. Covid was tight. 7/10
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Ajax
We’re all REALLY concerned about your mental fitness and health…
I feel bad, but nothing I say could be worse than the shit you just did to yourself.
You referring to his verse he just dropped or some discord/other personal shit? If the former, this is aight, if the latter, this don't resonate
You’ll never catch a real veteran obsessing…
Fuck how many times you view your own threads; that trash’ll NEVER be refreshing.
Lol
No one likes or respects you. Your writing’s a joke…
My first gear is Maximum Overdrive; You got your poetic license revoked.
Wasn't feelin it
Plus, we ALL know my pimp game is ultimate...
While your girl’s ‘extremely revolting.’ Her street nickname is Bolshevik.
Had to look that up & use context clues, clever.
Her handler must’ve deprived that beast of oxygen…
Your latest achievement in life was unlocking the cage they keep that goblin in.
A bit basic
I’m on Billboards, Scout. They cut your mic when you start to tell ya story…
Your alias is perfect. Your work’s ‘peaking in uncharted territory.’
Cool
I write like a ‘man possessed.’ Every verse is ascendant...
You wouldn’t ‘feel free to speak’ to me after passage of the Thirteenth Amendment.
I see what you were tryna do, but, it feels off cuz it already passed, yet the bar is written in future tense. This needed rewording, concept was straight
Your bitch is huge. I’ll drop that hefty lady, seriously.
She’ll be buried in a more ‘massive plot’ than Oliver Stone’s JFK conspiracy.
Conceptually ehhh, not much of a diss
Definitely highs and lows, but refreshing ,Bolshevik & peaking were cool. A few others either had the concepts but missed the execution, or vice versa. 7/10
It's easy to mimic a boring weirdo softy....
The only 'delicate matter I cover' will be the remains of your 40 year old body.
Leaving mommy, you & all the kids broken;
I'm causing more 'breakdowns with tissues' than the human body mid-covid.
VS
Plus, we ALL know my pimp game is ultimate...
While your girl’s ‘extremely revolting.’ Her street nickname is Bolshevik.
I’m on Billboards, Scout. They cut your mic when you start to tell ya story…
Your alias is perfect. Your work’s ‘peaking in uncharted territory.’
Either peaking or covid LOTB.
Then...
Refreshing = Quotation > counter measure > 13th = affair
Close battle. Quotables tied. I'd say Ajax was slightly more clever conceptually, Scout had better slightly better wordplay. Ultimately, I have Scout with one less miss although that closer almost singlehandedly lost it for him.
Vote: Scout
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