WANDERER
2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised
On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise
Ok
& Zuch lost but voters were scared. I’m calling that unfair..
Ur shocking top head robbery was the one genetics pulled off on ya hair
Never heard the phrase top head robbery so that makes this a stretch
& ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars
If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers
Bit basic
Gun bar plots in ur verses but no evidence of ur plans
Still no finished article.. & newspaper’s the only time residue’s on ya hands
I'm lookin for the wp but i cant find it. If there's none this is meh
BUT I’ll prove I let the bird fly if u don’t think I’m honest
Hand extended waiting for the finger motion to rock u, pinky promise
Wasn't feelin this, pinky promise seemed out of place.
As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro
For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose
Cool
Inspiring the youngins.. I’m a force that’s filled with adrenaline
If Ad’s influencing these kids it’s just corporate subliminal messaging
Ok
Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers
Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors
Decent closer
I liked pillow talk. After the opener I didn't like the next three, but you finished better. 6/10
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ADVERSE
Wand feeble so I draw eagles n shotties he gettin merked now indefinitely
Bring turkey day to the UK show ur fam
the spread then put the bird on his centerpiece
Way too wordy and the rhyme wasn't solid. Punch was decent though
It’s been a tough couple battles, this time dude’s getting trashed by me
And way Zuch made you his bitch bet you’ll do reviews for the mag this week
Ok
My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price
Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life
Lol
Ironic he got that bird physique and is an actual featherweight, right??
You’re literally Dave Lite, got a quarter of his skill n ur half his dang size
Another bad rhyme. Kinda funny
For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet
And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish
Cool wp
Supposed to believe you a convicted killer sprayin k’s...bro ain’t no way
Only time ‘Wand gettin charged’ is when he feelin frisky tryna get into some anal play
I was wit it until the punchline. Thought the charged part would've been more relevant
Know you get a lot of Harry Potter references...the 9 give him more of that
Once I put that cap on his head it’ll tell me he’s bitch how’s that for a Sorting Hat?!
Need some punctuation or rewording or something. I like the concept more than the way you worded the punch
Summer classic was tragic, squeezed past me in last NBL...this time I’m aimin for the fences
Third time’s the charm, cus the trey’ll leave you hangin like a pendent
Wasn't feeling
Stick figures made me laugh and axe was cool wp. 6/10
As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro
For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose
Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers
Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors
VS
My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price
Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life
For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet
And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish
After first read, neither verse was clearly better than the other and I have the quotables tied. I got exercise > sorting hat > centerpiece=charged for the honorable mentions. SO
Vote: Adverse
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