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Originally Posted by Sinacog
The schism; FOCUS -- riPPING OCEANS -- KISS tHE NOTION
RIPPING DOPE SHIT..ONLY TIME EVICTION -- NOTICE -- IS A SHOTGUN BLAST FROM THE LAND--LORD--
doesn't rhyme but at least you attempted something similar to a punch. technically a gunplay bar even.
I'm coming with dopest free's; the hopeless seas; soaken dreams --
FOCUS PLEASE -- I'll 'BREAK BREAD" -- to ''TEAR/TEAR'' apart your broken dreams
break/tear wp is pretty sad but its something.
I'm coming with dopes frees; the hopeless seas; hopeless dreams --
DESPAIR AND GRIEF -- only time 'you grew' is wheat and MEAT/
those are things that grow. cool story bro
I'm coming with hopeless dreams; the hopeless dreams --
SOAP AND CLEAN; EVACUATING EVICTION -- LIKE MOVING HOUSES --
i don't think you understand how evictions work tbh
I'm the cutest mouse kid -- the shooting spout mist
THE COOL OF OUNCES -- only time I need 'EVICTION' is moving HOUSES --
at least your referencing your oponent and using related concepts.
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So sinacog seems to be attempting to merge his troll writing style with basic battling concepts. I could see this being humorous if there was some cleverness mixed in but for now its painful to read. Less painful than the sword of destiny tho, so an improvement.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eviction
You don’t even get to the low hanging fruit, I had classics and buried the top.
So it’s funny when I get the clean sweep cuz ur people usually carry the mop.
very light. you sweep with a broom btw
I hope he realizes it’s fucking over, I never want to see this autistic text again.
If you want your verses to be the enchilada they have to be authentic, mexican.
this is stretched to me/wording is off
Fuck punches, that w/p will go over your head, and have you looking envious.
He doesn't have either, instead of a diss this idiot will quote the book of genesis.
statement. need more wit or a flip.
You can’t take care of yourself, accepting this battle is the craziest penance.
Zuch must think I’m George Wilson, the way he’s making me babysit menace.
bad wording. ok concept.
You said you're dope as fuck but like your fuckin religion you’re full of empty lies.
How did I draw this match? You put me in the gutter and I ate this kid like pennywise.
this is ok. you should have set up the IT reference, i had to look this up. who the fuck remembers that clowns name
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This feels like you were phoning it in vs sinacog, but this a pretty light verse. closer was decent.
Vote: Eviction. You could have tried harder tbh but its cool. Don't let Sinacog catch you sleeping bruh.