Quote:
Originally Posted by UserName
Listen, I quit drinking, it's time to focus on health
That said, I'll drop 10 pounds for every verse you wrote by yourself
punch is light but i like the humour
You’re fucking pathetic, Prowlers know you’re hopeless bud
You spent a DECADE as “The guy who sells broken phones for drugs”
not feeling this
“It’s Zooch like Cooch!” He says while laughing in friends’ ears
That’s hilarious. Newsflash, we called you FAGGOT for 10 years
this is funny and harsh
Bro, this shit with Jamie’s twisted, such a shady gimmick
Lookin’ like Zuch found his twin… and then had a baby with it
i want to like this more. concept is cool but something is missing in the wording, or maybe it needs a diff setup
Fucking Stick Figure, even you can smell the bitch in here
Hang Zuch from a tree and it looks like the Blair Witch is near
light to me
how about you stop asking friends for advice, to get a potent edge
Every time you approach a line you stress Fracture like Derrick Roses legs
this is cool
Respectfully, I know you don’t wanna tango, Queen
I’ll have Jamie hanging upside-down, naked like the Django scene
could have set this up better but still nice.
Guys a chump, but he’s definitely not hard to spot
Zuch's got his nose in everyone’s business... all the way from the parking lot
humour and wording push this over the edge
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Quotes: Derrick Rose, Django, parking lot
Close: opener, twin, newsflash
Step up from last weeks drop, but still not quite a peak UserName verse. Django and closer were pretty nice, but also had a couple misses mixed in.
Quote:
Originally Posted by UPN Zuch
I destroyed the NC gauntlet, trust my rep as the GOAT
You’ve beaten legends too, like FGR, Zelph, then FGR again by a vote
wording makes this funny. but this bar isn't actually doing anything other than literally stating his record. ill pass on this
Lose weight? Bulking up for this bro’s surgical
If you ever find yourself in a cutting phase PLEASE do us a favor and go vertical
funny. harsh. nice
I’m a lone sniper, so stop with this crew nonsense
Your partners will get picked from across the room like I’m assigning a group project
like the concept. don't need to snipe people in the same room, so i would have liked a diff setup. still ok
Barc called you an icon? That’s got me squeamish with it
You’re no posterboy, but your pic DOES hang above the toilets of bulimic women
kinda funny. kinda light
Guess I’ll beat you again, your skill gets absorbed from afar
But wait, if I’m here... who the FUCK is wording your bars?
this is nice. lol
You had a team alias on RM, it left me inspired son
Aloe weighs less than me, and he still carried your fat ass the ENTIRE run
not feeling it
Semi-auto hits your family, friends will rush for the stands
I’ll turn your girl into a vegetable, you’ll never touch her again
nice. wording isn't perfect but i like this.
Sixth sense says you got enough pounds to end life
One trip could make a story fall flat and kill a crowd like M Night
this almost works. but not quite
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Quotes: go vertical, group project, wording bars, vegetable
Close: posterboy
A couple bars came across too statementish. Liked the closer concept but wording is off to me. Clearly a dope write though, cause I ended up quoting half the verse.
Vote: UserName. This is a tough one. Zuch has the edge on # of quotes but also had more misses. UserName was more consistent and his quotes were all strong, but some of his other hits were light. Can honestly see going either way on this, but I'm leaning towards UserName w/ a slight edge on creativity (6 mentions vs 5) and harder hits on the quotes. Zuch misses were a little bit worse.