Mr. J
With a solid showing here. Not quite as dope as your week 1 which I no-showed, but still good nonetheless.
There were mostly highlights
know less than you...know.
That's where I wish I had Jesodist's capitals.
But seriously you know what I mean. The emphasis.
MMLP
Anyway I read these 3X each now and I think MMLP just nailed it with his Lars-esque mechanics of stringing rhymes together, end line to beginning of line.
His topic was more first person than J's broader overarching verse. I can't say either of those two factored in to it.
They both had me engaged, but I thought MMLP crafted a heftier verse.
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