master rock:
the verse was pretty dope it was very dark and graphic the smoothness was pretty cool i think the lines was better with its internals so soft nearly but with its tight structure its hmm neatly.. story wise its pretty cool interesting..
lucipher:
little verse was pretty cool and then it was dragged out to make a cool verse very entertaining none the less the story but yeh the lines were tight and the filler was cool where it didnt have too much but kept at a good pace.. thanks for the read..
vote = master rock
because it was better in general with length and with a story that unfolded to itself thanks all round just better...
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