first of all one neg, im always put off by the layout of your pieces hahaha but in isolation, the verse, man youre such a great storyteller, top level progression and pace to your stuff, technically proficient, natural smooth easy reads, great content I could go on but I aint clicking no links LOOOL and reading set ups. Its hard to produce such a long verse and have it work and engaging throughout, few ppl can do it, im pretty sure I cant lol!
The shutter island aspect caught me off guard, honestly ive only read about the film rather than seen it, I know the characters and overall arc etc.. so there may have been things going over my head here. I know enough about it that the bald man turning out to be the dr cawley for example, I enjoyed that twist, ironically adding a metaphorical layer to this, I imagine this wasn’t the first and last one…. the verse will resonate with most, I must be one of the only few ppl to have not seen it start to finish. that aside this would still beat most verses ive seen up to now. You’re the one to beat. Youll champ the league on this form, so please sign out ahahahahaha
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