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Hush kept hush this time around, don't fret, I gotchu!

Cool quote, let's see how this ties in with your piece.

FUCK YEAH! I was getting mad Shutter Island vibes 6-8 lines before you mentioned it.

This story from beginning to end was a rollercoaster, a good one at that. Incredibly well strung together and I love how the transition from his delusions are explained and done well enough for it to feel natural as you follow the course of the story. You managed to tie in 2-3 twists in a single story without it feeling forced or redundant. I think your pen game is elevating further, dope shit!