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Yeah its iSpaz against Mac. The fact is that you couldn't shoot lead
You wishin you could dead "i", but I'll kill you quicker than that skill from Red Dead
this doesn't work very well... 'you wishin you could dead I' is such an awkward phrase. I appreciate the way you made your bar accessible to people who haven't played red dead, but you took up so much of the bar explaining it that it lessened your impact
Your chances of winning is slim cuz you the wackest with it
You already lost off the rip so I'll break ya top off like a lottery ticket
agree with FGR... Haven't seen this exact method with lottery tickets but if you're not making shit it is dope
I'll get in a bitch slot. Hit it till I get a jackpot while this fool's hateful
You could say you felt a hole.. like that one time you built a pool table
you're saying he has felt a hole? The delivery here sounds like you're saying he has felt a hole.
But fuck the jokes. I want smoke and I'm runnin on no patience
So when I have that can pop over that metal tre it won't be the bar waitress.
tre/tray has been done enough in high profile battles (that dude with the lunch lady flip... Cant think of who it is right now). Wording itself is awkward. Two 'that's make the delivery weird, and wtf is a' bar waitress'?
You are a beast. No leash but I can sense the feelin of doubt
If you got fight in your veins, I'll have you fighting to stop your blood from bleedin out.
theres def an idea here but again, awkward wording takes it



]I got ur girl hittin me up askin to drop by
all she wants for christmas is you, thats the word around Spotify
again, sounds like the bar is actually a compliment? I get what you're going for but not worded too well
I hope you brought an ally into this death valley
once this ends in heavy oregon traffic you'd wish u never left Cali
Heavy... Organ? Oregon is an extra syllable. I'm also not sure it's an organ flip. I feel like this wording didn't help a reach of a concept at all
both our names are somehow related to the Apple wave
Mac's a best-seller & iSpaz got Steve Jobs rollin in his grave
get what you're going for but wording isn't there. Clever use of your name as well
nigga lost three times in a row how u won 2 times is a mistery
they say dont take your work home.. but u gotta work on that delivery
wording isn't bad. Concept makes like no sense to me though
Mac's a chef n i'm about to prepare the buffet
serve the table; not thanksgiving yet but a turkey gettin roasted today
calling him a turkey makes this feel like a 70's flick lol. Really outdated slang

Spaz had better punches. Both of you need more time to develop your wording

V/spaz