Quote:
Originally Posted by Fracture
*SCENE* ... You're soft. Imma get rid of you
You the type of black guy white kids comfortably dap and say nigga to
harsh. just a statement tho, no flip.
most women wont give puss to this creep
When he go to see a girl the only thing he puts in her bush is the screen
ok. cool wording. could have set this up better
While im the king yo. The text scenes own Beatles
For every me tho theres more aeros than what bodied jet li in hero
this is cool
Wisconsin? Yea.. Like Gein u make every lady dash quick
If only you could sniff the top 10 punches like you do Jamies mag pics
ok
Im truly sorry, i like dood. But the shootings starting
You hear my gun go 'borraaattt'.. Now ur belly up like guiliani
ok. would have liked more setup for the movie thing
Ya girl does her hair so I have something for grabbin
Next time u see her head, itll be pig tails.. ill havta lose em in traffic
light diss
He no killer. Any trigger squeeze is rumored
U went to an all white school.. Even then u were least likely to be the shooter
cool concept. could have worded this to hit harder
Already signed out... Aero a disgrace now
I'll hide his body in a landfill, he finally black from the waste down
not feeling this
|
Quotes: Hero, top 10 punches, Borat.
Honorable Mention: all white school
Might just be a difference in style but I wish you used your setup line more effectively. You have a lot of concepts that hit light to me because they aren't set up.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero
Grabbed my ruger just to whip him, dont need a homi victim
I'm fighting over the screen with the long nose I'm '96 Scottie Pippen
this is ok.
He yelled "this thotty trippin'.. I took this pic!!" Frac went into a massive rage:
"I should've known, I said let's get your side profile & she's like he dont have a page"
funny
Somehow Frac got my gun, then said disappear or beg for your life
All you heard was poof, the sound my anus made after getting pegged by his wife
please don't do this again
Got her pregnant & felt the baby move, Grabbed guns & said it's not worth it right now
All you saw was slides under the kicker.. I'm tryna commit a personal foul
this is cool
How'd it feel pretending to be black? It was Not a good look
Must've felt as empty as the rooms were telling Black people sorry we're booked
nice concept. needs a little tighter wording to keep the flow. also this diss is more against either black people or American racism than Fracture
Listen, I hope I dont offend - it's my bday I'm out w my friends
True story, first 3 bars I called my girl to type.. I'm literally dialing it in
funny but light
Bullets drench your bellhop outfit, put to sleep in a war zone
No fabric softeners, throw in white sheets from applied heat to your wardrobe
not feeling this
|
Quotes: Scotty Pippen, side profile, personal foul.
I like seeing something other than a standard battle verse. You're playing into your strengths of imagery and humor. It definitely backfires when you take it overboard, but if you get it figured out I can easily see you beating people with this style.
Vote: Fracture enjoyable reads on both sides. I think Aero came with enough punches to make his story verse competitive, if he had skipped out on the pegging bar and had a few more solid hits. Fracture has a more straightforward style but his consistency with punchlines did enough to give him the win.