FUCK A META, straight facts to damage ya rep
figured someone flippin Cash so much wouldn’t have gamblin debt
( nice flip on gathered into. A bit of a cliche trope but I’ll give it a nod)
what the hell Zuch? i wanted someone nuanced dude..
not a mixture of Mulan & To Wong Foo, set to star in Moulan Rouge
( mmm.. this was effectively driven but I didn’t think the Moulan rouge part caught me .. it just rhymed well. Eh )
robbed me in the PPV spitting some hoe shit..
our first battle was razor close, this time youre getting your throat slit
( effective I like this. )
casket is comin, i got shooters always blastin and gunnin
funny you look like Naruto cuz we’ll have Arms at your Back as ya runnin’
(Niceee)
holy fuck your wack, heavy set with 30 lumps of fat
when you call the top, no scientist in the world will debunk as fast
(Nah)
& it’s a fact he’s BROKE. lost all his cash to the bookies..
if Res got his hands on a fortune he’s in a sweatshop packin some cookies
( swear I seen some shit like this on him . I’m not sure .. he could probably attest . But this one was rendered kinda weakened by a vague memory )
ain’t been Fly since 09 so why you gloating w/ ya punches?
hate to Sully ur image Res, but they’ll find your body floating in the Hudson
( yessir )
cock each fist back, raise em at both ends
your head & neck’ll go so far back we mistake em for old friends
( kinda played but I like your version it’s ok )
when i say Macau i’m talkin bets & choosing a flight..
when Res says Macau he’s talkin to friends introducing his wife
( not a fan of this one )
dudes callin you self-centered is a dumb mistake..
you’re only shallow cuz cops got close before i fully dug ya grave
( ok bit a lil lazy of a closer )
Aiyyo
You’re welcome for ya lines. With low key biting you’ve paved the way..
But I aint lettin that shit sliiiide. Bitchh I got all your bases covered like a rain delay.
( this is a nice open . Pretty clever angle )
Headshot got you in a swivel.. the bullet big & rough as a log..
he in the same spot as Gigi Bryant the way this Pop will make u feel all up in a fog.
( I like this. My only thing is how loose the “ feel” part is . But I don’t see any other way of executing this . Again pretty clever )
Oh u a newlyed huh? Well at 35 & fugly her situation was to settle..
you wanted a trophy wife but ended up with that participation medal.
( lol ok .. decent )
They have trouble conceiving. That’s the hand ur dealt in life bitch..
when he says he does it for the Culture- it’s just random semen they In Vitro his wife with.
( nice / abv average flip on recently used concept )
And if that dont work I’m ur guy. I won’t be about making love..
-i’ll break her in on the fuckin couch cushions like a baseball glove.
( this one went over my head man my bad )
^& u got a perfect relationship. You do drugs while being a fat cow is her fate..
u spend ur nights High & Inside while she at the dinner table crowding the plate.
( ha nice )
You are a discord ho.. actin like u politickin’ for an election bid..
befriending everyone.. he has bigger Acceptance issues than Aunt Becky’s kid.
( ok )
Nobu is a line you thought was slick and simple
No, blue.. told him to quit Kung’s style but he ‘stickin with that bag’ like a drifter’s bindle.
( hell nah )
You’re a try hard.. now Res shooting & there’s goodbyes to be said..
when I arrive with the lead,
..VP debate.. u gonna have all the attention as it Fly on your head.
( elaborate concept there . Pretty uncharacteristic of you to heve so much going on and this is an example . Nice)
Gun bars, girls, cadence, flow.. aint nothing here u can part with..
Dawn of the Dead.. you just got eaten alive in every fuckin Department.
( nice closer)
Mahfucka.
4-4 n certified quotes . I feel as if resins verse had more bars there were borderline quotes so he gets the nod. Nice shit by both tho
V/ resin
There you go guys.
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople
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