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Old 11-20-2020, 04:32 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by UserName View Post
NC shits on you, nobody calls this man the greatest
Now everyone can see Jay get wasted like San Andreas
very light
We’re not alike, I write verses for my legions of fans
You write ‘Verzuz!’ in comments while Swizz streams on the ‘Gram
not feeling this
Jay stay dropping trash, but I think he may be high
I drop, & Fresh shit gettin’ wiped like Zuch when his baby cries
this is ok
All this rapport’s a bore, house is outfitted with poor décor
Police don’t need a ‘no knock’ for a guy who can’t afford a door
funny
Culture said I had kids? A possibility whenever I fuck whores
But I’m calling Jay’s girl, I’m curious what I gave her 300 bucks for?
don't like this
Next time I’m bringing a hanger, cuz lately hoes are slippin’
& that pussy’s getting The Wire On Demand like HBO subscriptions
this was cool
I been fucking your aunt, and I’m diggin’ her thunder thighs
We had a 3 way, nutted, and I left some kids on your mother's side
ok
Regardless, this is a hassle, I’m trying to write shit an skedaddle
Goodbye JaysonFresh, Signed UserNameWinningThisBattle
what the fuck was this
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Originally Posted by JaysonFresh View Post
User desperately tryna revive career, why bother?
u gon dieeee anyway. ya life a car breathalyzer theres 'no .2 it for starters'
concept is ok but wording doesn't hit
YOUR corny jokes hav us like wtf. User done? He should just stop
last week u showed an Answer.. then got hit with Culture shock
nope
let vultures flock. doughboy aint got stamina to pause
save my gun bars for next week, nigga u already close to dieing of natural cause
nice concept. better wording would have made this dope
& those hunger pains'll eliminate u before any challenger
his stomach 'always grumbling' Karens use it to speak with the store manager
nah
I’ll fuckin stage ya death a suicide, make that the scene
Have u Layed out, tool in ya mouth.. that’s a Cpap machine.
ok
& Fresh got that formula to win, wanna know how I'll rock?
exceed max number of log ins. look ANYONE can put Username on lock
nice concept. wording is off. ok bar
soo what'll kill him firrrrst. is it Fresh or his cholesterol
experts say with proper masking, COVID a struggle to catch.. so is User ina Trust Fall
again nice concept, poor wording
& ur bout 2 inhaler puffs away from a lung collapse
this kinda beat down'll need sraL's coconut oil to get Users health back on track.
i don't get this
User had no knock, the wire. mothers side and Zuch's baby were close. Seemed like you phoned this one in, I don't think i've seen this many misses in a verse from you before.

Jay had natural cause, username on lock. Trust fall would have hit with better wording, .2 was close. Nice concepts in general but some of the wording made me cringe.

Vote: JayFresh. Definitely would have expected to be voting for User just looking at the names on the battle but JayFresh came with a lot of creativity. This ended up being a close battle with Jay having better concepts and User having better execution, but both having a lot of misses. JayFresh's wording was really bad in some places, so User probably would have won this one if he didn't have a throwaway bar for his closer.
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