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Coop
When it comes to multies on here less is more, I think I had the same problem a few weeks ago, less rhymes and more punches will take your farther, try not to make your bars gender specific because you shot your self in the foot as your opponent is a girl and you wrote for a guy, broke as a car with no steering wheel is basic, I didn't really feel anything from the verse.
@Jamie
I liked can't put your own together, you go down on rebel wilson was funny I didn't like the rest of that bar, lost to a girl wasn't really creative or nothing but it hit.
v/jamie for having a more creative verse, coop needs to tighten up his wording.